Thread:GalaxE/@comment-36159587-20191228065849/@comment-36159587-20191230025807

@Echo - Echo's backstory is put on hold.

I'm getting the idea that she's not much of a fighter person, so I'm putting this out for you to consider. If she were part of Night Raid, why would she be willing to kill targets? Otherwise, if an assassin doesn't have much reason to fight, I'm not exactly sure how I'd be able to put her in for a more major role.

Finally, as Teigu are built for offensive purposes, I'm seeing a considerable lack of that in her Teigu. I'm fine with the boosted speed, but you might want to add more to her abilities to fight with her Teigu, and also an ability to take it off, as Teigu can become draining and are best when it's convenient for putting on and taking off by the user themselves.

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Adding some things out there:

1) The Empire is a medieval-like setting, but is more technologically advanced than the neighboring three countries.

2) A Teigu usually only has one ability/umbrella of abilities. Most Teigu are offensive; armor-type Teigu usually are activated by a weapon, the Teigu itself.

3) No Teigu was built alike to each other. Similarly, no Teigu was made to accommodate another. Therefore, there are no "sister", "brother", or "twin" Teigu, and

4) Each Teigu is unique. -Galaxian-