Thread:GalaxE/@comment-36159587-20191206063245/@comment-36159587-20191212034652

Oof, "Moeru no Yume" is my feeble attempt to incorporate symbolism into a passionate poem with strong positive feelings

I do not feel such strong positive feelings as Hitan (Yume) does; it's not an excuse for my lack of portrayal for his voice in the poem, though.

Nonetheless, it was also well-written, in my opinion for now. It's a balance of the inner turmoil Hitan feels tearing him up inside, and his protectiveness towards those he's close to.

I like it.

-Galaxian-