Thread:Enchanteddragons/@comment-32460917-20181214105541/@comment-34012245-20190104065703

I don't have much for the AS ver., but let's see what I can do! Magic is present in this au, correct?

I don't see anything worth commenting on Clay's first death (seems fine to me tbh)! Accepting that happened, here are my thoughts on yout two ideas for Micah.

1. Iirc the order the haze was given was to abduct only 2 people, give one the snake, and leave. So out of all the village maybe only Micah and his mother get taken since perhaps they died first? He matches the snake and comes back alone.

2. If we're going for a good reason for Micah to be traumatized, then I think this version is better. Knowing how Clay is, I think it makes a lot more sense too It does have the downside that we're stepping a bit more on headcanon territorry with Clay being able to step in and out of the Haze. Or is it canon in the Kagepro? ^-^ Both are really good though, and I can't really decide! Maaaybe weas could ask Xenon to pick one?

I think Damian dying with MJ would be a bit odd, especially if we consider the fact that MJ is a deity. It's known that Damian had contact with lots of people before, maybe one of them could be the one? I have no idea lol but we could ask MJ.

The thing for your characters sounds gr8, and since they're yours, I don't really think I'm the one to criticize them :')

Maybe Sil in the haze is more of a depressed bean. Perhaps sort of how she got with all her relationship problems and Solitude? So she's basically her bubbly self, but repressed thanks to loneliness.

Caedey rejected Kenneth because he was too independent for her to control :( Afterwards, she pretended he never existed. I do imagine Kenneth trying to contact his mother after remembering he's a demigod. Although thinking about it, if he's in the AS, does that mean he's employed to Hester in the au too??? I wonder why someone would want an amnesiac, forgetful teen in their group :P

About the remaining spots, why dont you try using some of Xenon's other characters? He's got several and afaik there's quite a lotdistance of. info on them too! :D