Thread:GalaxE/@comment-36159587-20191228065849/@comment-36159587-20200107173158

I think I know how to start with their backstory, but I usually tend to be better at clarifying things than starting them. I usually headcanon that they're a family of mercenaries working for the Empire. They're with very high esteem in the hierarchy, too; the past Emperor likely favored them, though I would need to develop the past Emperor a bit. I have a headcanon that might need clarification--

@Time @Specter - How do you believe the Thaohals would deal with someone in higher authority openly opposing their methods, whatever those may be?

With that said, this review might be general for now. Most of this is primarily @Specter, but I would likely appreciate it if @Time @Eliza you looked over certain parts too.

Aereon's seemed kind of flat for me so far, due to not really revealing much of her thoughts in-RP, and her backstory is pretty flat for motives, too. I don't know much of her backstory in GGaD, but I presume she was in an arranged marriage? Was her original family (the Gray family) with similar motives as the Thaohals'? I want to know how her backstory influenced her personality, maybe specifically, if you can provide that. And now that I think of it, a copy-and-paste would be appreciated for her personality.

I also want to know if the "leave the family and you die" is due to some belief of treating the family like some sort of military faction, or if it was something passed down from some generations ago that might have stemmed from a similar belief.

Question: Is the acid, like, with some component that's flammable in itself? Is it more capable of combustion after a while? I'm getting slightly scientific, sorry. I primarily want to know if there's that scientific explanation between small and large amounts of that acid.

I might reduce the smoke screen function a bit. Night Raid and the Revolutionary Army aren't superhumans who can see where poison is coming from. In this case, the Teigu's functions might be divided into different sections.

I'm curious as to what personal precautions she has taken against her own Teigu harming her.

What effect does the acid do to armor?

I'm interested as to your explanation of how the liquid refills without external substance. It's not that important, but if I were to have an explanation for that, do you have any ideas?

The special ability mainly gives "Someone's gonna die" vibes to me. I might modify or leave it out until circumstances that make it needed arise.

And to specify, the liquid only negates her sense of pain. It doesn't stop the source of pain (or heal), correct?

What tasks do you see her using her Teigu from youth from? Such events would be needed to explain her proficiency. It doesn't make sense to me if she were to be mostly a planner and not an action-taker; I'm presuming the Thaohal family is not sexist and does allow women to go on missions, but Aereon's not giving me that vibe of someone going out to fulfill missions. It's not particularly important either, but you all know my obsession with a strong backstory, correct?

-Galaxian-