Thread:ThisIsXenon/@comment-36433141-20191207014927/@comment-36433141-20191209225230

Aren't normal book chapters, like, 1500 to 3000 words?

9000 words? Yeah, then probably with that much, I can include my story in that.

Ok, well, Im thinking of rewriting Time's backstory, Clocktower, since the first time I wrote it I had no idea where I was going and it was bad too.

Well of course I know my beginning, but it's kinda more to establish characters? Ig Time is at first a very arrogant, self absorbed, yet confident mage apart of one of the strongest mage guilds out there, and he doesn't really question their actions and such.

But here comes the transition to the middle and stuff, there are multiple events that happen that make Time question his family's morals, starting possibly with his first mission? Or maybe just as he's several missions in? Idk... anyways, he becomes conflicted more and more this goes on. Idk what the events should really be though. I'm also thinking of including a family member that's kind and stuff that helps him stir his inner conflict? And as well, throughout the story, he slowly comes to see what his family is doing, and how evil they are or whatever, but I don't really know much on how to do these things. Anyways, what comes next is...

...The climax and stuff, where of course, it lines up with his most notable part in his backstory, ig by now, there should be a lot of turmoil between him and his family. Enough to cause a battle and in the end, for Time to kill all of them. And in contrast to Time in the beginning, Time is no longer arrogant or self absorbed, and not really confident and more doubting. I guess he should too also be less trusting.

From here, Time barely makes it out alive as a deity, and finds his domain, and maybe later, his twin sister too, though I would have no idea how he would get that lead to know she exists.