Thread:GalaxE/@comment-36159587-20191228065849/@comment-36159587-20200112021919

@Rune - Brief critique is below. Please respond in a new post.

Formatting for Teigu names is: "(General Ability Summarization in 1-2 words): (Name of Teigu)".

As the Teigu still lacks offensive and defensive ability, how would she fight?

Please add more to her personality more specific to the world, such as her political viewpoint. Basically, parts of her personality that would aid me to give her strong motives and thus a strong part in the story.

 ...but I thought mascara was a fish."  -Galaxian-  02:19, January 12, 2020 (UTC)