Thread:GalaxE/@comment-36159587-20191228065849/@comment-36159587-20200106025843

@Rune - Finished comparing my planning for Helen and wow I done angsted her up oof

Cool, I've found the character I'm going to twist a lot to my liking.

I'm going to tentatively think that Teigu are usually not just named "Running Boots" xD. For one, the format is usually "(General Wording of Ability): (Name of Teigu). All the other Teigu in this work currently demonstrate it. I'd also suggest looking for clever play with words that might have related meaning in other languages, or using big words if you have to.

The Teigu doesn't seem to have much offensive or defensive ability to it. I'd suggest adding to it as needed xD

As with Ash's personality, I'd like for you to add more things than just things that imply she's been forced to live in a village that was somehow nuclear bombed in this world with no nuclear bombs. Basically parts of her personality that can aid me to give her a more major role in the story xD.

If you want, you can tell me your draft for her backstory xD, I might override it completely but y'know :). I got more inspiration from her personality and alignments you have so far xD

She gives me heavy poor border village girl vibes if there aren't more motivations for her to fight xD

-Galaxian-