Thread:YingHe/@comment-36159587-20190627224346/@comment-38036641-20190713131458

I honestly don’t see what’s wrong with your writing.

It’s descriptive, but not a lot since sometimes, you get lost in the descriptions. (I sgteuggle with that a lot.) But you only gave enough description which is good. However, (and I’ll read it again to make sure), the beginning was a bit confusing, but like I said, I’m going to have to read it again to see if that’s the same.

Overall though, you captured my attention, which is good, and you expressed their feelings well too and I was into it.

Well done! I love your writing no matter what it is or how bad you say it is when it’s not.