Thread:ThisIsXenon/@comment-32273133-20190308141311/@comment-32273133-20190909010531

GGaD fic giving me trouble as usual

I have one scene that I’m stuck on, it feels so awkward ack I hate it and I’m trying to figure out if I actually need it. logistically yeah, I do need it, the scene right after it depends solely on location and so do the next two, three scenes [or at least the next twelve-fourteen Hours in story time].

I sort of know how to fix it but at the same time i bet y’all are tired of micah’s problems taking up all the screen time [and they’re about to do that even more!] so opinions??

for those who haven’t read it it’s 45k words and while you don’t have to take it on, I’d appreciate it if you did and gave constructive feedback! I grow as a writer by hearing about what I did well and didn’t do well.