Thread:YingHe/@comment-36159587-20190728010324/@comment-36159587-20190806235829

No like I wrote like this:

'Syd gasped, shuddering..."No...that can't be happening...this can't be true...!" Shuddering deep down, he took a deep breath...then started forward.'

(I wrote that as an example; I actually improved so the linguistics are actually better than what they would be)

THERE'S SOMETHING CALLED COMMAS GALAXE

-Galaxian-