Thread:GalaxE/@comment-36159587-20191228065849/@comment-36159587-20200127012517

Alrightyyy Ash. Sorry for the long wait! I’ve been trying to get the form together to see what I can be more specific on.

For now, Ash still needs more motivations. I like the idea (though it’s semi-unrealistic, but that’s fine! Not much realism in this world lol) that he is aware of the corruption and tries to talk it out. But as all the characters in here will be fighters, he needs motivation to fight. On the Empire’s side. It’s not acceptable for anyone to be on both sides at once. One could fake being on one side while being on the other in reality, but it would be impossible to be on both sides at once.

Think about it this way, I guess, as a start. Why would GGaD!Ash kill others? Why would he fight? Then apply those reasons to the AgK! World. If you need help, I’ll try to help ya.

If you wanted to give him a more selfish persona, maybe there’s something threatening to him about Night Raid and the Revolution that’s prompting him to fight for the Empire. And he might have some sort of outward façade for his loyalties. Regardless, there must be a motive of some sort, masked or not.

If you really want to, you could keep the form this way and leave the development to me. However, that’s risky, because I obviously am not you and will likely warp Ash as a character in another direction.

This offer stands for anyone, but the warning is always prevalent—that I’ll change your characters even more than what you might imagine.

Reminder to Rune and Eliza that your forms aren’t accepted yet.

 ...but I thought mascara was a fish."  -Galaxian-  01:25, January 27, 2020 (UTC)