Thread:GalaxE/@comment-36159587-20191206063245/@comment-36159587-20191212034310

"Memory" actually still seems decently written, even to me now.

Nonetheless,,,

The mood in it is strong.

,,,

To give you an idea what I'm talking about:

"Ignoring the nagging messages of loss,

We tried to make the best of it all,

Promising lies,

Planning what would not be,

For life is full of surprises that are more bad than good,

And time relinquishes all it gives."

...I was very pessimistic while writing this, obviously.

-Galaxian-