Thread:Nimarfira/@comment-39487125-20191111031709/@comment-33229352-20191111222311

I like it a lot! I don’t know all of your character’s lore from before, but from what I could understand, it’s really interesting. I really like your writing style, albeit there was a couple grammatical errors, but nothing that detracted from my understanding, so it’s more nit-picky than anything.